Swimming in the Ocean

I love swimming!

When I swim

In the ocean

I feel free and graceful

I wish I could breathe underwater

I don't like going up to the surface for air

Reviews

[Toni Prehoda Kahler]

I, too, love to swim, though I do like bursting through the surface for air, and then diving down. I like the wish you wish. Suddenly I think of your wish to breath underwater and your not wanting to come up for air as metaphor, but my mind always does that to me. Simple and beautiful!

[Lily1111]

I love to swim in the ocean for the exact same reasons. Don't you sometimes wish you were born with gills?
Of course, that would present a problem on land, not to mention, it would be hard to get a date to the dance. LOL

[Pinky]

I used to feel like tht as a child... nice write!