Changed

Have you ever noticed how much a person changes through the years? It's almost heartbreaking.

Hey, how are you?

I miss you,

I really do.

Everything's new,

You are too.

You've changed,

Very deranged.

It pains,

To see you like this.

That was such a miss,

A true dis.

How's the girl?

How's the dame?

Happy with the fame?

I'm the same,

I've changed.

It always rains.

The warmth is missed,

It really is.

It has been a few years,

Gives the tears.

I overcame the fears,

I'm waiting for the clear.

Reviews

[Asante]

It's always a shock to the system when someone we shared a unique bond with severs that bond by way of changed behavior. This piece hit really close to home as I'm sure it would for so many having experienced that. This piece gave me beauty in straightforwardness. I love it. Good work. :)

[Polly]

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you like it. :)

[Asante]

No problem! I'll check out some more of your stuff throughout today. :)

[Polly]

That is very nice of you, thank you. :) I'll see some of your stuff too. ;)

[Asante]

You're generous. Thank you in advance, little lady. :)

[Polly]

No problem!

[Manu]

Nice piece of writing.
I think most of us can easily relate to this. Simple yet very powerful. People do change with time because change is the only constant thing in life. But it really hurts to see that change.
First stanza is my favorite one.

[Polly]

I know, it's hard to get used to change. :/ Thank you for your review!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was a heartbreaking very emotional piece.
Although in a sense it was also a pretty strong piece.
I loved the rhyme scheme you had going on.
I enjoyed reading this.
Keep writing :)

[Polly]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[ManasaC]

Growing apart is the worst phase ever. Witnessing the change is nonetheless heart wrenching. Very well written. I loved it!

[Polly]

Thank you so much for your kind words!

[ManasaC]

You are Welcome!