Autumn

It's chilly this evening, and everything reminds me of autumn. :D

Trotting through skeletal trees,

Leaves crunching under my feet,

The orange-gold leaf crumpling under it.

A gush of wind, and the still leaves,

Flying across the horizon,

Of a chilly autumn evening.

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

Ah, the coming of Autumn, with the smells, colors, rains, winds and a slight chill. Actually my favorite time of year. I welcome it. Lovely poem. Thank you for sharing!

[Joshua Marshall]

This is a nice description of Autumn. Simplistic yet beautiful.

[Polly]

Thank you! :)

[Manu]

Now, this is what I call beautiful :)....
Very well written.
I must say Polly ..you rock :) :)

[Polly]

Thank you so much, Gorthi! You just made my day, haha. :)

[Asante]

A perfect snapshot of my favorite season of the four -- Autumn. :)
Very easy to visualize these lines, the imagery stands strong, and the pacing is up to par.
Great job as always, Polly!

[Polly]

Thank you so much for your kind words, Sante!

[Asante]

My pleasure!