You'll Be There

Just another song I wrote. I hope you enjoy. :)

It's a dark night,

It's a tough fight,

And I'm still longing for you.

I miss you and I need you

To go through

All this

But I know

It's just a dream

I just need to wake up

And scream

And you'll be there,

You'll be there,

Won't you?

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Creativity gracefully flaunts through your poem...
Rightly said, there's always someone who would truly approach you in worse conditions
A way to keep writing buddy ;-)
Btw my nick name's Polly, ha

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Powerful read. Short but amazing and strong. How would you know if they're there if you're asleep? Hence, ending the poem with a question was, genius. :)

[Polly]

Thank you so much for the kind words, Cyprian!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!

[Manu]

Nice song !! your love for playing with words can be seen in this poem. I am visualizing you with guitar in your hands and singing this song !!
:-) :-)

[Polly]

Haha, thank you so much, Gorthi! You're too kind. :)

[Manu]

Your welcome :-):-)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

A beautiful song. Add melody to it! It will sound magical. :)

[Polly]

I do have a music sheet for this. ;) Thank you, once again for your kind words, Fahmida. :)