That first Kiss

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The sound of owls and crickets bubble around me as I sit beneath the willlow tree of my family. To me, nothing could be more blissful other than death. My eyes are closed, my ears taking in the sounds. Suddenly I feel a hand carress my cheek. I have no need to open my eyes and see who it is.
"Yes, Chris?" I whisper. He doesn't answer me but takes my hand instead. I can feel his breath on mine. I open eyes and see now that his green eyes take me in, leaving me breathless. Slowly but gently, he lifts my chin up and my mouth touched his. The kiss becomes deeper, by each second. My mind is singing, the boy I love is kissing me in my backyard. The stars almost seem to form a dotted smile in the sky. I'm in heaven; I'm holding my breath as long as I can. Chris holds me closer, and my hands have found their way around him. Our kisses are sweet and passionate. Slowly after an eternity, I remove my mouth from his, and walk inside my home. Love is sweet, yes so very very sweet.

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[VampireBunny]

I LOVE IT! BTW its WriterBunny, Yiu use very nice adjectives and its very dexrpitive Id love to read the next chapter please! :)