A New Me

I am an angel with broken wings,

Desire to fly high when I know, I need to be still.

With fire in my eyes and pain in my soul,

I know I have to fight hard, to equal my score.

I am still burning in the fire of hell,

Walking carefully on a steep lane, trying not to fell.

For all I have is my will, my strength.

N I know one thing that the road to my goal is hard but achievable in the end…………………….

Reviews

[TheLostMind]

"For all I have is my will, my strength.
N I know one thing that the road to my goal is hard but achievable in the end"..
These lines are the essence of this poem.. Yes, sometimes in life, things don't go our way.. We might fall, we might break, but we must not give up.. We must fight for the things we believe in..

A really good write.. :)

[Misha]

Thank you dear Friend and i am glad you like it

[SEO]

I like the positivity and hope this poem exudes. "With fire in my eyes and pain in my soul" is a really good visual. I think you could do without the "N" at the beginning of the last line. It seems out of place and kind of threw me off. I think you should either say "And" or go straight to the "I" but that's just my opinion/suggestion.

[Misha]

Hi Madison...thank you for the valuable review, highlighting the area of improvement and your precious time, will keep this in mind.

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and hopeful poem. Good to feel free and clean like a Angel. I like the tone and energy of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Misha]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.