Burning!

Just Love

You carved my bones

As you touched them,

You breathed out
giving shape to my breasts

You dived with your fingers
to become my spine

You shaped me insane

Just longing for that divine pain! 

Author's Note

Thankyou :)

Reviews

[Ashwin Shanker]

It reads very vivid and surreal. Maybe you could extend this to something even more greater

[Pragati Chaudhary]

extend in which manner ?

[Ashwin Shanker]

I dont know how you could extend, but I liked what I read and I wished it was longer, thats all

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhh! That way
Okie
I'll definitely try to extend that further

Thankyou soo much!

[Akshat♥]

Lovely write. Too hot to handle. Sometimes words are all we have.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much :)