Swollen

"Words"

It is so difficult for me
to get away with what I had lost
may be its like poison
It doesn’t lead to death at the start

Hollow are my bruised shadows
squealing at my past
what have you done to me
I always seem angry towards my hollow cast

You are like a lost fountain found
voices that tear the skin like angry bloodhounds
Like a killer hidden among the shadows of my past
Now, don’t show me your f*****g fake scars

Holding on the views of your inertia
I became a fool of your sanctity
You wiped the way I loved you
what hav you done to me

 

Reviews

[Rahul]

One of the most heartfelt writes u have come up with... so filled & brewed & shuffled & amazingly "stuffed" with deepen thoughts. Mostly, when it comes to love, everything is fair & fine at starting, but when the one gets bored with partner or those feelings of love, "SWOLLEN" is all what one gets in the wake of having poor heartaches... that wake u up overnight... nudging ur soul... knocking that body with some shaded memoir memories of jaded past. Very honest, & genuine write it is... well penned & dug with caramelized colorism of darkling love.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes, you are right!
Being Love struck is all pain at the end
Thankyou soo much for liking it :)
Keep reviewing!

[Rahul]

pleasures must be mine. no??? LOL

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes Ofcourse!

[Rahul]

yes!!! see... now am flirting! Ha!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

You cant have that Privilege with me
:D That's why Get well soon :)

[Rahul]

and.. just like "water"... u flushed out my wow feelings under the bridge. awww... poor broken heart. hahahahahahah!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Hahahahaha :D
Yeah! LOL

[Anshuman Aryav]

Wow.... amazing....I have no words for this beautiful creation...
Keep writing...

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhhh! Thankyou soo much dear :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

Appears to be lost love.
Anguish poetically expressed; many great lines.
Impressive work!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes!

Thankyou soo much for reading Jimmy :)

[Aria Cardona]

Wow, just wow. I feel this has a lot of anger in it as well as sadness, I like it and I can relate to it. You did good, just one thing I see and that's when you put "may be it's like a poison" Did you mean to put 'maybe'? I hope i'm not offensive in saying that.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

I used may be because Love is not actually Poison and I m haunted by that Thought so I used May be to decipher that feeling of confusion!

No not at all Offensive.....
Feel free to comment and review :)

Love
Pragati