Illusion

Words :|

From the lanes of happiness to a dark heavy room
from the curiosities of mind to a deep deserted sadness
I am and will be there as my existence is my presence
but the truth is that.

Someday I would �" Just be an Illusion

From the howling winds to a pin drop violence
from the astounding emotions to a very pale evening
I cannot ditch love because it’s meant to be
forced to crawl inside my heart, drowning to never be rescued again

Someday I would �" Just be an Illusion

When I lay my hands on yours
I feel there is something attached unseen
the delighted sorrows again start to breathe
as if your veins touch my soul again

But
Someday I would �" Just be an Illusion

Reviews

[Costa Siwale]

intense, I like the inevitability of human end and how you capture it, its sad but beautiful. well penned

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thanks a lot Costa :)

[Costa Siwale]

of course, my pleasure

[Rahul]

even a girl is herself an illusion to the boy who's fallen for her, so desperately. he ev'n never knows neither will ev'r know when & why she takes an U-turn like a gush of colden wind, & will change his life in the gist of love. she's nothing more than -- a receptor to heart -- but also the deception of mind to him. also, the same happens with girls as well which makes 'em feel more like... "An Illusion". quite an imagery's it is. nicely covered with thoughts!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

You recreated the Poem very well and I am glad that you like it
Thankyou soo much Rahul:)
read moreYou recreated the Poem very well and I am glad that you like it
Thankyou soo much Rahul:)

[Mirror]

No matter how real we want to be, we are always an illusion. a mirage that fades away.

Another insightful poem, Prag. well done

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes! exactly
We fade with time and situations!
Thankyou mirror
Your review made me go :)

[Mirror]

:)) Okay. You are welcome!