Immunity

Reality

A concealed faith is borrowed from the shelves
that’s how the Origination of various things work
Over powering the anonymities
Under concerns and those calamities
Shattered scars and broken heart sills
crying mind and gorges inscribed within

Shilling cries are never heard
nor the faith is evenly cursed
here what’s lost is more than found immorality
when people speak of Love
it feels as if;
It’s some sort of heavenly perturb!

Reviews

[Mirror]

"A concealed faith is borrowed from the shelves"
Great opening line.

-Concealed faith
-Borrowed
- From the Shelves

Three outstanding conditions. This is the kind of faith majority possesses.

The Metaphors used in this poem reveals the predicament induced by faith givers and takers.

"Shilling cries are never heard
nor the faith is evenly cursed"

In fact, you are using strong, powerful, and thought provoking words! Each line has a unique string attached to it. I love all the lines independently. this one is my favorite,

"..crying mind and gorges inscribed within"

Perfect work, perfect work, perfect art dear. Impressive.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhhhhh!
You made me go Happiee today
Thankyou Mirror :))))

Much Love!

[Mirror]

Sweetheart! You deserve to be happy. You did a very good work!!! Much love.