Savage

Truth!

Pulled by Air
A heavy storm rolled down the street
what it left was
A Vision filled with Pity
with which
the trauma could be seen
then unseen
by those who eventually left the traumatic city

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You create a deadly scene with your strong description. I wanted to know and read more. Thank you Pragati for sharing the amazing peotry.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohh! I am soo glad
You made my day dear Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I am glad and you are welcome.

[Ranger Kessel]

I got a mental image here. Of ruin and catastrophe. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for posting

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah. Thankyou soo much Ranger. Thankyou for commenting :)

[Zoya]

When things go wrong, people tend to run away from the problems rather than tackling them. The storm hit the city and left behind a totally devastated scenery...which, as you say, was unseen by those who fled.
A deep write yet again. Well done.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah! Thankyou so much dear Zoe!
Lovely words from a lovely writer

[Xochipilli]

This kind of makes me think of a really bad storm that wrecked a city but at the same time a bad memory from the city that makes it feel traumatic. It gives off a sad kind of vibe, but I like it too.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou dear Xochipilli........
Your words mean a lot to me

[Priyanshi]

A savage is seen only by the one who really cares for nature and blind to them, whom the nature doesn't mean anything.
loved your poem.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes thats soo true

Thankyou dear :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Sudeep Mishra]

Nature sometimes returns you back what it had from you in the past. Sometimes its a bliss and the other times are full of storms.
keep doing.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes it does.....Thankyou soo very much Sudeep :)

[MaximumFlight]

I honestly love it. It's wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou dear MF :)

[Ty]

"...the trauma could be seen, then unseen..." Brilliant.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou dear TY :)

[Ashwin Shanker]

pretty savage indeed.... great going pragati

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohh Thankyou soo much Ashwin! So ur back!

[Ghania]

Deep and creative.
Great!!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou Soo much Dear Nerdy :*

[Ghania]

You're very welcome. :P