One

In this stormy day
From light to eternal darkness.
I was here, watching those who stayed
Thought, loving you
One to remember the past
One to forget the future
And none to take advantage of the present.

Reviews

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I like the depth of this poem. It takes us into the inner eye and the view that we see while perched upon the edge between the living and memory. You captured alot in a few short lines and did so with an amazing flow of well crafted words.

- Ash

[gravitylava]

I think it's beautiful... I like the pattern of using past, future, and present, it's kind of wonderful
gooooood poem