Mustang Sally

Here is the 2nd in the series of poems I've writen, follows "I Try"

Mustang Sally

 

Fresh off the lot

 Deep red and sleek

I live – hunger for speed

Fine tuned to perfection

    Any car lover’s drug…

 

But,

 

You can loose control

    My glass shatters…

 

And someone dies screaming

 

                       

                                                                                    Crystal Kells

Reviews

[Wildecat]

I can remember growing up and the muscle cars. Nice write.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Okay... have to love the name lol... deffinatly made me think of my aunt... The poem is pretty good... I think you could add a little more to the ending of the poem...
"But,
You can loose control
My glass shatters�
And someone dies screaming" I think you could add a little more to this part... expand it and appeal to the reader's emotions... and I think it could use some similles or metaphors.... you could tell how the glass shatters or something like that... and Someone dies screaming is good but you could add a little more to it like... someone dies screaming as time begins to slow or something like that... however that is only my opinion...

Great write! Really good poem! Can't wait to read more :)