so close to you...

A random poem that struck me.

I want to be so close to you that the only music I could hear would be the beat of your heart.

The only sight I could admire would be your appealing smile and your innocent eyes.

The only piece of heaven I could feel would be your arms wrapped around mine.

And the only wish I could make would be this moment, which should last forever.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Lightfalls]

Beautiful!!

[Simple_mee]

Nicely written. Short n sweet!
Well done! ;)

[Dev]

Short yet sweet.. The Perfect Ode To Love.. Well written and nice read !!

[Francez]

A very passionate poem indeed. You picture the love beautifully. I like the icon & the picture you choose also. :-)

[Sean M. Addams]

i love the passion of this piece the imagery is nicely done..overall nice job on this... overall a very beautiful piece very uplifting... nice job!!!

[Frantzuu]

you did a great job there. :)

[deeps]

This is wonderful, So very beuatiful!
I like the font you used and the color.
A write so well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Almost like a song your words are flowing. Poem is beautiful and hopeful. A outstanding poem.
Coyote