Tommy The Turtle

I was walking back
from “This and That”
I found a rock
and there I sat.

Upon the rock
alone I stared,
beyond the grass
I saw a hare.

The bees they buzzed,
the birds they flew,
the world’s so busy
I’ve nothing to do.

I sat and sat
and sat some more,
I saw a turtle
just as bored.

“Can I share your rock?
There’s room for two.”
He said, “Why not.”
We enjoyed the view.

We sat and sat
and sat some more,
comparing shells
no longer bored.

 

Reviews

[Sarah]

Okay, this was seriously fantastic. What a completely adorable poem. I wanna talk to a turtle. *_* The only thing I'd add is some punctuation for the dialogue, a few question marks here and there, perhaps? :) Great job!!!