Missing

Missing dreams, missing hope, lost inside with know where to go, drifting away from the world , lost in turmoil that has no end around and around my head spins losing ground stuck at where I have been, can’t move past, can’t go back where does that leave me at? I go through my day without making a sound; an invisible entity that has no weight, passed unnoticed carries the weight of the world on her shoulders. I must do this. I can’t do that responsibility wears me down. The strength I need has gone missing my will to live is quickly diminishing. Bogged down in pain and bitterness I have lost myself. Where is the light to show me my way where is the love that I have locked away. I survived but the price was too steep, where does that leave me?

Reviews

[M.Kilani]

to be fair I see it more as prose than a poem , it lacks a rhyme scheme , the content is good , there is a typo in the first line (know) should be (no) regardless to that it is good .