Bad Time

Time was bad and

 you left me away,

 with millions of memories

to rest in my mind away.

for once I cried,

another moment 

I smiled.

 As it was the time 

to prove myself

to be brave and courageous

and to show him

that I stood on my own

in my life.

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautiful work...
strong emotions have been expressed in here and the wonderful part is....
As it was the time
to prove myself
to be brave and courageous
and to show him
that I stood on my own
in my life..
keep writing.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you, thank you, thank you soooo much, dear....glad for your kind visit and review.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

omg omg omg.....welcome my friend!!

[Sikandar Khan]

Every Writer Has One MasterPiece Writing I Think This Writing Is Your Masterpiece Its Simple And Describes Very Important Thing.......

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Sikandar...even I too think that this was my best piece....thanks once again.

[Sikandar Khan]

I Hope U Will Read My Poem Madam Madam I Suppose This One As mY best.....

[Psychotic Lily]

Wow this is beautiful. We can''t always be stuck with the misery and sadness of someone who left us, taking us for granted. This is really touching. I really know how it feels XD!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much...you understood that emotions very well.....I'm glad for your kind visit.

[Hope]

A touching and powerful poem, Priyanshi.......
I like to be very independent as the character in your poem...
Really enjoyed!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much , Naat, for appreciating it . I'm glad for your kind visit.

[Hope]

My pleasure.....

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"and to show him
that I stood on my own
in my life."

Your words are simple but meaningful. I think it should be more to prove to ourselves how strong we are than to show anyone... What we are, affects us and not someone else...
Nicely penned.

[Priyanshi]

Thank You YummaKay. Yeah, you are right....thanks for understanding it .

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Priyanshi 😊

[Surya]

Memories rite, but at last you stood on your own....Life teaches us many things..
I enjoyed it..:)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you Surya for enjoying it.

[Rahul]

memories of love always hurt cos once they been the reason to our... ecstasy. very honest and heartfelt poetry it is.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you very much for appreciating my poem . It means a lot.

[Rahul]

Anytime.
Well... "bad-time" is quite a catchy title... i'm passing throu' some rough time now-a-days so i guess, this title had my attention. Everyone has bad time, but sometimes, it's... we.. the only one who bring that so-called "bad-time" to us, eventually. We're the creator of our own yatch...and certainly the destroyer of whole ship as well. Interesting!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much once again and I agree with your words.