My Ocean Home

Dabbling with poetry again...

The beat of my heart,

Crashing waves,

A breath deep within me,

An echo of the sea,

My racing pulse,

The deep current,

My home,

My body,

Me.

Author's Note

Hehe, oh attempt.
(more of a story person)

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

i like the imagery. i think the metaphor of a crashing sea makes your poem insightful.