Why did you say I am beautiful

Why did you say I am beautiful?
This earth has but one graceful
Voice - sprinkling water, full of sweetness
Heart childlike full of tenderness

You said on my forehead does the sun rise
The sparkling stars twinkle in my eyes
Untied hair were the clouds floating
My words-honeyed, were ever enchanting

We were inseparable like scent and flowers
Into each other’s eyes we would gaze for hours
Life was sincere responsibility, still was fun
Come what may, from trouble we would not run

You said the faults were "often, majorly yours"
To harmonize the relation "efforts, of course ours"
Reasons superficial but galore you drifted
My silent words but no longer gifted

We, our being full of pain and longing
Still we couldn’t be each other’s belonging
The parting, an amicable solution be graceful

Still why did you say I am beautiful.

Reviews

[zainul]

One who really loved you has his own assessment.
Besides,as John Keats pointed out long ago:
"A thing of beauty is a joy for ever:
Its loveliness increases; it will never
Pass into nothingness; but still will keep
A bower quiet for us, and a sleep"
So enjoy the compliments,dear friend.
Enjoy the superb parting as you have passionately wrote down:
"The parting, an amicable solution be graceful"

[Prritiy]

Thankyou Zainul for lovely quote and being there always :)

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure,dear friend :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

"We, our being full of pain and longing
Still we couldn’t be each other’s belonging
The parting, an amicable solution be graceful

Still why did you say I am beautiful."
A very sweet poem of love and longing after the parting done with an excellent pen...:)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Sami for your wonderful comment, its encouraging :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Prritiy]

good night batman :)

[Sami Khalil]

Good night cat woman...Lol

[Prritiy]

hahahaha i don't think you saw my pic holding a cat :P :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are right...Just a title I guess...Just kidding...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Mary Christabel George]

I just loved this one -

"We, our being full of pain and longing
Still we couldn’t be each other’s belonging
The parting, an amicable solution be graceful
Still why did you say I am beautiful."

You did perfect landing.

[Prritiy]

Thank you so much dear Mary, am glad you liked this piece :)

[Mary Christabel George]

You are welcome Honey...

[Prritiy]

:)

[Brokensoul]

I can relate to this one. alludes to my poems in many ways. Well written.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for your kind words.

[AlexValkyrie]

An excellent read. Well done.

[Prritiy]

Heartfelt thanks for your generous appreciation.

[Ency Bearis]

Splendid poem and you're beautiful, nice use of rhyme scheme.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Sir Ency, thank you :)

[Ency Bearis]

You're much welcome

[Prritiy]

:)