my name.... (mera naam)

a passing thought

he erases my name
makes the page unwritten
but my mark on it will remain
remain engraved once written
3.55 pm

मेरा अंकित  नाम  वो  मासूम  मिटाते  हैं  पन्नों  से
जब  मुझे  मिटाना  याद  है  तो मुझे  कैसे  मिटा  सकते  हो  
3.51 pm, 17 may, 2013

mera naam likh kar vo mitate hain pannon se
jab mujhe mitana yaad hai to mujhe kaise bhul paoge --original in 'Hindi', this isn't publishing hindi font l and g, so changed words in hindi fonts.

Reviews

[Peter H]

hmmmmmmmm this one seems profoundly deep but at the same time short its very intricately themed and abstract

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for your kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

Bravo on a nice poem. I really like this...:)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Prritiy]

knew this was coming :)

n your this dp is nice rather intense gaze...... the other two pics were of yours?

[Sami Khalil]

My look-alike...Lol...Have a great one...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[zainul]

I totally agree with you.
Brave write,
What is after mera in the first line?

[Prritiy]

Thankyou for your precious comment. :)

its ''ankit'' meaning written, engraved, thats a pure hindi word :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome. :)
Then you may add ''ankit'' after "mera" in the first line as follows:
mera ''ankit'' naam likh kar vo mitate hain pannon se

[Prritiy]

thankyou so much for the suggestion, actually that n few other words i rewrote for here reason being it was printing hindi fonts the original one was-
mera naam likh kar vo mitate hain pannon se
jab mujhe mitana yaad hai to mujhe kaise bhul paoge

[zainul]

I understand your point now.
Thank you dear friend :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Sheila Kline]

Once we "are", we are never again "not"! Very well captured thoughts of "don't forget" me ever!

[Prritiy]

thankyou so much for beautiful thoughts :)

[Ency Bearis]

A brief thoughts but meaningful with significance. Great one.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Sir Ency :)

[Ency Bearis]

you're welcome

[Prritiy]

:)

[gabrielle]

Indeed, some people may want to forget us but it's impossible to erase the memories we shared with them. short yet meaningful piece.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou Gabrielle for the kind appreciation.