he, she .... they

tried a different way...

................................... Lovingly

he handed her a rose. Sweetly

she gave him a smile. Lightly

he touched her brow. Shyly

she handed him her hand. Gladly

he took her along a path. Believingly

she with him walked. Assumingly

he made her look forward. Conformingly

she told him to continue. Confidently

he held her hand striding. Receptively

she on him put her weight. Convincingly

he build her, them a house. Affectionately

she made him, them a home. Lovingly

(he, she ---- they lived)

Reviews

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Beautiful poem,i liked especially the form you used on this one producing a romantic write.Keep them coming :)

[Prritiy]

Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation.

[Luke L]

Lovely, sensuous piece I quite like it! Definetly made me warm :)

[Prritiy]

I Thank you and am glad it warmed your heart :)

[Luke L]

you're welcome

[Prritiy]

......... :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Paradise of true love unfolds here your works endear love and a heartfelt warmth.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for your wonderful words full of warmth.

[Inder24]

Wonderful , well written !!

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for your encouraging words.

[Inder24]

:) you are welcome !

[Prritiy]

:)

[Leslie Philibert]

clever use of English,putting the pre-verbial adverb at the start of the phrase, but at the end of the line.
Another example of fine work from India..

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Leslie, I bow before these words of yours.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

A witty scheme of words... you present the reader with this verse...

[Prritiy]

I am grateful Glen for your kind words, it is encouraging, Thanks.

[zainul]

Presented differently.
Sparkled wonderfully.

Congratulations,Prritiy!!!

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Zainul for always encouraging me with your wonderful words :)

[zainul]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. This is so sweet and different that I like a lot...Bravo...:)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for your encouraging words, glad you liked it. just thought one day to write in a different way :)

[Sami Khalil]

That is also why I like it...You are welcome...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Prritiy]

without this batman smile.. something remains amiss :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

☺☺☺

[Prritiy]

aww your tongue is barely visible :P :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Lol

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^:)