I See, I Feel

An experimentation in form

This poem has moved. Be sure to click on the youtube link below to read and listen:)

Audio at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p5ZQ39TDGU8

Published in Strays. Available on Amazon

Strays is a collection of two extended narratives and more than forty love-themed poems, exploring the meaning of romantic love while we have it and attempting to find the healing after its loss. Found within these pages is the short story Gutter Dog, the novelette Ginni, and the poems False Skin, the Boy Who Wore Clothes, and the Black-Wit Reveller.

Reviews

[Andrew Perez]

Nice! I love the form and the size of the font on "I see" and "I feel" at the beginning and end of the poem makes for an interesting bookend.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Andrew.

[Zahra]

Beautiful, loved the flow and feel of it

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, I Have a Voice.

[wordman]

pryde your poetry is always profound I loved it

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Ron.

[wordman]

any time pryde it`s always my pleasure

[A. Amos]

A graceful and eloquent write, as always great write...

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, AA.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear

[00000000000000000000000..]

Mmmmmm deep I love it dear Pryde:)I don't see

in my cloudy

opalescent

vision

I feel

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jonathan. I was just reviewing you. Funny that.

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Great minds think alike:))))))))))))))))))) welcome dear Pryde:)

[Luke L]

Lovely piece, very visceral I liked it quite a bit

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Luke. Just the effect I was going for:)