The Boy Wore Wore Clothes

A spoken word parable

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Author's Note

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Reviews

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A very well worded and very descriptive poem.

I have picked up a few words myself from this piece. Always learning! Explain one thing to me.....your title. Is that a typo or does it have some other meaning i am missing?

An interesting parable about defiance and common sense and the ability to change old ways of thinking.....even with a loincloth!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly descriptive piece that feels cold at first then runs to hug us, well done, good read.

[Pryde Foltz]

Who doesn't love a hug. In the end it is the warmth we remember. Thank you, friend:)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

So picturesque and so lovely. Lovely piece of literature. Well-told story. You always do it to perfection. Keep writing.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Vatsal, Very kind:):):)

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh look at those baby blues!!! :) what in the world brought this on?? i can't imagine .. i see those troglodytes clumping ever onward into the cold and ice ..not a brain among them ..those neanderthals .. till the "misfit" is born ... love the music!! perfect fit for your story .. interesting to say the least
E.

[Pryde Foltz]

I love a misfit ... the world not always so much. Thanks E:):):)

[Alfred Kukitz]

It's 70 degrees in Vietnam I'm freezing becomes most times it's over a 100. I donned my field jacket, felt the warmth of my nose, I tickled inside I wasn't cold.

Always enjoyable, I see talent in the way you put it all together, visual, music, words. Great write Pryde!

Regards,
Al

[Pryde Foltz]

When you live in heaven ... a fine day somewhere else is hell freezing over. Actually that is way too hot for me. I will choose a fine day somewhere else. Thanks Al:)

[redzone]

well, we do come into the world, bloody and naked as a blue jay... and while you talk "clothes", I think it is outlook and attitude you speak of, which of course we are also born without... ah but then it begins with the first thing being the pink or blue distinction to shade our thinking and it just descends from there II think... isn't it wonderful how there are always some who are willing to go against tradition and shake up everything... yeah for the rebels...

thanks Pryde for the parable, well spoken..

redzone

[Pryde Foltz]

The world could always use another iconoclast for sure.Thank you, Curt:)

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm all for sitting by the fire with the women folk. Obviously they're the ones with sense. Great story

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Baby:)

[andrew mitchell]

A profound write, so much power comes with clothes. I mean one would not be so terrified in a holdup if the robbers were naked with their little thingamabobs, they would seem so powerless when giggles are centred on their anatomy. and how could you take a politician seriously disrobed. A great write!

[Pryde Foltz]

You may be on to something. Thank you, Andrew:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i dress so casually...hate long pants, love shorts and t-shirts...the less the better...

in the winter flannel shirts, seldom jackets...

this poem made me smile...it's like we got rid of the fig leaf...and went naked for awhile, then realized clothes are actually sexier...

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jacob. They are definitely warmer:)

[wordman]

lol,give me my old bluejeans and a t shirt and i`m happy
loved the story pryde,you are an artist

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank so much, Ron. I love that youtube thinks a good follow up to this is a clip from the Good, the Bad and the Ugly. They get it. Hope your day is going swimmingly:)