His Daughter

A Book by Rustling Leaves

A young girl is called down to the dungeon by her father. The butler leads her to a cold, dry cave, where she finds her father and a monster.

Chapters

The walls were crying (chapter 1)
The monster is a boy (chapter 2)
Short and sweet (Chapter 3)
Nothing is worth that pain (chapter 4)
The man who has to die (Chapter 5)
The story of Elward (Chapter 6)
The vase is octagonal (chapter 7)
Hope is poisonous (Chapter 8)

© 2024 Rustling Leaves

Author's Note

I am bad at dialogue, here's my practice book. I tend to edit a lot before publishing a chapter, but some may be less edited than others. I hope to receive reviews about the dialogue, story flow, and character consistency. Compliments are also appreciated!<~<

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Added on November 1, 2024
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Rustling Leaves

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I've been writing since I was young, I'm in college, and I'm wanting advice on how to improve my writing. Compliments are nice too. -Psithurism means "the sound of rustling leaves." more..