I'd Like TO Formally Introduce You To....

This is a prose that I call a poem but wanted to label a story, just was afraid no one would read it with that title...but really I just wanted everyone to get a sensory feeling of my experience...nothing more

Nothingness.

No

Not vast emotiness

of lacking to exist.

Just, no time...

No sound,

No-thing.

And its warm...

yeah its warm.

Oh- there,

yeah look right there...

See it?

That! It's getting bigger

Ahhh, so soft,

and pure,

Never knew light could be

well, so touchably soft.

(Yes like Charmin)

But doesnt it feel so great!

It sparkles as it moves,

from afar it moves in rippling waves

but you're getting closer.

Its getting wamer.

Not that sticky end of summer warm

where you wish for winter,

But that perfect day of spring...

remember?

That one perfect day when your neither hot nor cold

You can wear a tee-shirt or a jacket

youll still be perfect.

:D

Now you see it don't you.

It's not really waves of light,

theres little like, hmmm...

sparkles??

Whoever said light had sparkles.

But each little speck of this, sparkles.

I knew you would ask that.

Well. Do we have to know what it is?

Does it really need a label?

Just sit back and float closer.

Feel it? I do...

peace,

love,

contentment,

I know!!

Like for once I am complete,

I dont crave for anything,

not even chocolate.

wow, we are so close to it now!

I can see its sparkles dance on me!

Where they touch I tingle.

And I feel...rested,

full of energy but ready to relax.

First time for me really.

I never lived that wonderful inbetween.

I was always hurried or tired.

This is GREAT!

Well I am glad you like it to...because-

I'd Liike you to meet... My Idea of Our Creator!!

Creator- You!

Pleasant feeling isnt it?

:D Have a nice existence.

Author's Note

THis is vastly an experiment I have had a WEIRD and baffling last two days, I thought I had to get back to a feeling I cherished, this was that feeling, I was just going to write again how I felt about it but thought it would be cooler if I took everyone with me on the ride. So I don't care about any critiques really. just would like some thought provoking comments like you agree that is pleasant or, I don't see that at all, or the visual imagery was spot on or something. If you can find something nasty to say by all means make yourself feel better, but well, thats all you would be doing because I wrote this poem for you guys. TO put a smile on your faces and pull you along on my imaginated journey. :D Hope you liked the ride.

Reviews

[Kelley]

Your amazing girl! And I never know what your going to write.....smiles
This takes us to a place we can all relate too. Just sit back and relax.


Great write!!! Thanks again for a beautiful day.


Kelley