whiskey down your throat

Sometimes what a girl wants a girl gets....

I want to be the knot in your stomach
I want to be the first drag of your cigarette
I want to be the needle tearing your flesh
I want to be hot coals under your feet
I want to be the hand you can't walk away from
I want to be a stiff drink in a dirty bar
I want to be your first dream of the night
I want to be the fire in your desert
I want to be the thunder in your storm
I want to be the tracks up your arms
I want to be the whiskey down your throat
I want to be the girl that you regret
I want to be the one you hide from your friends
I want to be the one you can't get enough of
I want to be your addiction.

Reviews

[C.T. Bailey]

I want to be the first to say that your words overwhelm with your desires. I have never known personally or known of someone who loved with such intensity. I imagine that it would be an addiction. I suppose that I will be pondering these words "as I lay me down to sleep" this evening.
Very nice write,
Todd