Secretive

Your breath

filtered life saving air

on my neck

seductively.

 

Your hand

quivering strong possesion

arond my wrist

leading.

 

Your mouth

hot tormented beacon

against my lips

forceful.

 

Your target

aching innocent girl

Is me before you

apprehensive

 

Your word

brutal true admission

ringing in my ear

eternal.

 

This night

scary beautiful destruction

rests in me

secretive.

 

Reviews

[A Simple man]

Wow... such a powerful powerful poem. The way each section flows getting deeper and deeper into the message you are portraying is very capturing. I love this! Very nice finish as well. :-)