The Night

When I lay in the dark

and everyone is asleep

and there is nothing left to say

I listen tot he night.

 

She speaks to me

in whispered softness

of stolen dreams

and lost innocents.

 

She weeps silently

of pain and regret

for a life lost

to a broken heart.

 

And I cry too

just as silently

just as painfuly

we share our regret.

 

And in the dark

you sleep beside me

never knowing

never hearing the night.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

she speaks to me,in whispered softness,of stolen dreams,and lost innocents
she weeps silently,of pain and regret,for a life lost,to a broken heart
and i cry silently,just as painfully,we share our regrets...
lovely words full of emotions,i did relate to things
lovely write..

[Brandon Dunbar]

Very well done. I like this one. Great job.