Lost Caves

Tanka style

Wallowing, wailing;
despair like caves where I am
walled in and waiting,
Sensing a hope that glimmers
If I could find a candle.

Reviews

[Anise]

as far as brevity goes, this is very good. i am not familiar with the tanka.
I will have to look that up

[QRamble]

i use shadowpoetry.com to find various forms of poetry, I've found it to be quite helpful.

[April Blue]

Nicely done, I enjoyed the words...

[emipoemi]

I have no words.....my voice is in my awe! Well done!