Time follows in a close second

I know I said I wouldn't be releasing anything for a while but I found this whilst cleaning out my clutter, its a poem I wrote a month or so ago which I forgot about. Make of it what you will.

Watch as he travels through time and space,
Passing beauty whatever the case,
He passes a cow, a building, a tree,
An old Lady fallen on her knees,
The desperate Human,
The death looming,
Everyone too,
naive and hurried,
to see it,
I watch,
as I pass.

Reviews

[My Fair Lady]

And that sir.. is how it is done. We live in our little worlds.. too busy to stop and help, smell the flowers or listen... really listen as the wind whistles in the leaves.
"I watch, as I pass." I like this piece a lot.

[AlieahRose]

IT'S SO DETAILED...
I LIKE IT ALOT...

[David W Moore III]

And why are you so disconnected? It's like you are watching a movie. Interesting.

[Omar Fendri]

I still can hear the echoes of your words haunting my own. Short but awe-inspiring, fabulous and full of meanings. Somehow, you poem made me think, really ponder deeply :)
i like it, beautifully written

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

short but very interesting poem...really had attention and made me think deeper, great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to pay attention and not at the same time. We can lose the desire to see the bad and the suffering around us. A very good poem. Made me think.
Thank you
Coyote

[Closedown]

Curious and delightful piece. Well done.