We never know

Short but I don't write for anyone but myself, I don't publish for anything but catharsis.

An external self-loathe,

From an internal source,

Subjectivity explicit,

Origins; stern objective discourse

Author's Note

Feedback would be great.

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

IT MAY BE...
SHORT...
BUT..
IT'S SOMETHING TO...
READ OVER AGAIN...
THIS IS STRONG...
THANKS FOR SHARING...

[Que]

Brilliantly written, in very few words you managed to impact the reader deeply (at least I was).
Great poem, love how you make the reader think about what the meaning is.
Cheers.

[Liza]

concentrated words....
my understanding

an outer longing to belong
from an inner feeling of wrong
visions out stand
foundation and core objects

[An owl on the moon]

Your words confess much through your mind into that external mind of us all. Glimpses of what lies deep inside. And we never know.. true...

[BriAnna Wyble]

i love the complexity of your word choice, yet the simplicity of this poem. its absolutley a wonderful write.

i cant wait to enjoy your other work!

-bri

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the twofold of the conscious sensate human being~ the depths here beg a deeper dip into the more subtle aspects presented here~ a meditative piece for your readers ~a sharply cognizant write~

[JENY]

wow...
with a handful of words....
you created a magic...!!!
awesome..

[Akshat♥]

there has a purpose in this poem...the way you write is awesome..
thanks for sharing:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Each line with purpose and meaning. To look inside our minds and desires. Can open some scary doors. A excellent poem.
Coyote