Within One Passionate Breath

His only want was to be with her. His only true desire was to become the only one within her memory. Her eyes sparkled under the dazzling sky as they walked on the cold, firm ground. They were alone. No distractions, no people to complicate. There was only her and the light complexion she embraced religiously. 

She was a faithful women. A swan graced by the waters that held her up. She was a thoughtful women. Able to heal any broken heart with the bounce of her soul. This was why he couldn't see himself apart of her life. He was selfish and tempted. In his eyes, she deserved someone better. Someone as beautiful and as marvelous as she was. He was afraid that if he stole her heart, that he would crush it. It was not his intention to. It was just that he saw her as a saint. The most angelic of angels. The most graceful of the swans. The one women in his life who was not scratched nor broken. She was perfect and he didn't want to be responsible for the death of that perfection. 

They both kept walking under the brisk sky, but the warmth upon her cheeks confused the seasons. He grabbed her arm firmly and spoke.

"Why me? Why did you pick me?"

The deep waters of her eyes focused as she smiled her defiant smile.

"Because, even though you constantly fight battles of your own, you put them on hold to help me fight mine. And that, my darling, is perfection to me. Your soul may be rigid and firm, but if a rock was as soft as a pillow, then I wouldn't have needed you as much as I do now." She said within one passionate breath.

Author's Note

Should I write more short stories like this?

Reviews

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

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Thanks for share your talent.

[Zoltan]

You seem to get the hang of both sides and have your way to express it. Definitely keep doing it!

[pj]

If you enjoy writing, romance or whatever, keep doing it. The more you practice the better you'll get. I don't think some of the reviews I'm reading here are doing you any favors. Whatever ideas you have, I think you need to work on your structure. If you want to write, write. If you are serious about writing don't be offended by criticism.

[Lizardo]

Wow, this is really really interesting.
I love the sort-of mistery behing the story but by far I enjoyed how you ended it.
Keep on writing, you have talent!

[Satan]

You should do whatever your heart tells you to do ;)

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

This short stories are excellent. Is a way to impact with the audience with a story that touch the soul. The story is a art language. Write is like paint the life. You have the talent, keep on paint the life.