Fell In Love

falling in love isn't easy.

 

Fell In Love..

When you touch me
My heart melts
When you smile at me
My heart sings

 

I'm way into deep
I see you in my dreams
We look so happy
I'm falling apart

 

When you are away from me
My heart aches
When you hug me
My heart gets butterflies

 

I don't want to let go
I want you to hold me
And just let every bit of me out
I'm such a wreck

 

When you fed me all the words
My heart ate it up
When you say I'm perfect
My heart believes it

 

Why did you turn your back on me
I need you the most right now
Because I can't take this on by myself
You're my strength..

 

I'm sitting here
And every single one of your faces flash in my head
I start to cry
I can't say goodbye

 

No one understands…No one..
Its just too hard for me..
I can't explain
I just fell in love with people and a place
Who I can call family and a home…

Reviews

[Calvspw]

into the heart a glimpse one sees into the soul through the eyes one sees, into the words one hears together a tear one weeps, believe everything is only a wish away, believe and the answer you want is yours wishing on rainbows heavens gate, till the end of time, wishing knowing it will come true til the end of time you must only believe.

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I like the innocent yet mature feel of this piece, how it moves, and the metaphors.
Keep up the good...
it's beautiful!

[darkgurl]

A very well expressed feelings of love, written so well, i like your talent.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

I enjoyed your poem...very heart-felt work.

[Trip]

nice work on the poem. I really enjoyed it.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Your emotions are very well expressed, nice work on this poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah