I Wanna Be..

I wanna be able to live without this...

I Wanna Be

I wanna be mad at you

But for some reason I forgive

All that you have done to me

I still find a way to accept you

I thought I could let go

But your still here and in my life

I can’t trust you, but I can be your friend

I am trying.. Ok.. I am..

I wanna be able to sleep at night

Without feeling scared

To feel free of my fears

Stop worrying about the future

And just relax my body

And close my eyes

Stop the crying

And sleep….

I wanna be someone that can fly

Someone that can shine

To forget the past and move forward

Able to trust and run wild

Just run from everything..

Let my heart love and not hurt

Just to be happy..

I wanna be following my dreams

Do something I love

Become what I want and know

To be successful in everything I do

Just to let my mind imagine

Not think about failing

Or falling…but I do..

I wanna be me

Without feeling pain

To be loved by someone special

To be held in someone’s arms

And never let me go..

To be told “everything is alright”

To not feel as you did with me..

Scared and broken..

I wanna be alive…

Reviews

[laceyjane23]

this is an amazing poem! you did a great job! you have a real talent for words, please please stick with it!
laceyjane

[Lezlie]

this is the BEST poem i've EVER read!!!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

You will be fine , I know that , thank you for the poem Yos

[Orlando Murcia]

This was Beautiful! I love the truth behind this poem.
Sometimes it's hard to forgive but, you're doin it.
Great piece sweetheart
keep writing from your heart

Orlando

[Raja]

We all wanna be alive, and that is the reason why we keep on searching our world love. Once we get that (i doubt how many really find), we never let go of it. We try to compromise so many things for the sake of our love.

I liked the flow of words, the spontaneous thoughts, the bitter-sweet feelings about the love, and most of all the familiarity in this poem.

Thank you.

Raja.