Blacken Heart

Blacken Heart

How long will you stick around this time

A week, a month, a year?

You left me a few times already

The first couple were easiest

But the last was the hardest

Because I needed you the most

I still do, I am breaking quickly

Right now you’re the only one that can put a smile on my face

Because you know how

Please don’t leave me

I haven’t mentioned anything

And either have you

What the hell am I suppose to do

The memories we hold in our hearts

Will never be gone

I have to face them each day

When ever I think, your there

Where ever I feel, your there

I hate it

How ever I love it..

I don’t know why

But you have this huge net over my heart

You drag me in

And let me lose inside of you

Please Don’t leave me

Here alone again

If it wasn’t meant to be

You wouldn’t be still here with me

I know what your doing

Trying to form what we had slowly

Acting like nothing happened

But deep down in my blacken soul

It haunts me

And that’s when I can’t trust you

Or anyone..

I feel bad for the next one

Because there is no way into my blacken heart..

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Reviews

[JadedSparrow]

Silent Wind said it best...Breath taking. Absolutely breath taking. More so because I have been in that pit before. Your pain is more tangible with each line, your suffering, almost overwhelming. Thank you for sharing.

[Tovli]

a lot of emotion packed into this poem. enjoyed the read. tovli

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Good Poem, Yossi

[Gravedigger]

Breath taking. every emotion was perfectly conveyed, and I could feel your pain and desperation with ever word. I have seen many love-inspired pieces, but this one is truely unique. I hope you find a way to survive.

Warmest Regards.