Cure

Cure

I was driving to work this morning

And out of no where tears fell from my eyes

Because I was thinking about everything

I was thinking where is my cure?

Will my body ever be glued back together?

I got to work and I looked out the windshield

I broke down like a old beaten up car

I laid my head down on the hot steering wheel

The heat didn’t make me move

Time was ticking and I had to go in

I open the car door and I shut it slowly

Because the door felt so heavy

That’s how weak I feel

I walk towards the back door of my job

I take a deep breath

And then work was over

I walk back to my car

Open the heavy door

Start the engine

And it happens all over again

Tears, sadness, hopeless, scared, and lost

I am praying for a cure

To help me through this

When I got home I looked up into the blue sky

And I whispered

“Please God, send me a cure”…

Reviews

[Larissa G.]

I felt the emotion very strongly. I would recommend adding a few other images here and there, but I did like how you mentioned heat in addition to sights. :) Also, check your tenses - they switch quite often. Overall, lovely.

[Orlando Murcia]

I have felt like this many of times, where I have felt so weak and I couldnt even move. I know exactley how you felt hear and you did a great job expressing your heart breaking emotions on this piece.

Great write!!

Orlando M

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Think he did and will you just need to take it... you are strong Kylie, just use the help suggested to you and all be good again Yos