See

A poem about my life mixed into one..

See

I imagine myself running with the wind

But I don’t see myself doing so..

I picture me and you being together

But I don’t ever see it happening..

I remember every memory we shared

But I don’t see all of us going back..

I struggle from losing everything

But I don’t see myself falling deep..

I dream of becoming a writer

But I don’t see it coming alive..

I look all around me

But I don’t see nothing but God’s creations..

I stand between two paths

But I don’t see me walking through any..

I exist in a river

And I see me..

Reviews

[lauren emily]

Sadness washed through me when I read this.
"I stand between two paths
But I don't see me walking through any.."
This whole poem is just..really powerful and filled with emotion.
Awesome work,
~Lauren

[Laura E. Aranda]

I really like this one. It is the third of yours that I read and I can relate to this one. It is bittersweet. Good luck in life
Cheers, lea

[JadedSparrow]

I feel a ping of disappointment. Was that what you were trying to convey? If so, well done. If I might make a suggestion though:

"I look all around me
But I don't see nothing but God's creations.."

Perhaps change nothing to anything. It might make that line flow better. Other than that I enjoyed this poem a great deal. As always, thank you for sharing.

JadedSparrow