Fears

This is something I wrote September 17, 2007...And I still feel that same way...

Fears
Fear of showing to much
Is something I can't get over
Fear of getting hurt
Stops me of making a move
Fear of being lied to
When all I want is the truth
Fear to fall in love
When no one means it when said
Fear of being alone
When I need someone
Fear of my dream
Because I am afraid of not succeeding

Fear of not being happy
Because the tears never stop
Fear of losing someone
Because I failed
Fear of not being enough
When I try my hardest

Fear of dying

Because of leaving some behind

Don't let fears get in the way of living your life, right?

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

Nice. I think that many can relate to this.
The ides that you present are very good, and well illustrated but I do not like the fact that you repeated the word fear so may times, it's kind of disturbing.

A.M.

[Last Lying Look]

Great poem! it's so real and true. I feel just that way too.