Amazing

He makes me feel amazing.. <3

Amazing

I drove to your house last night

And I just couldn’t wait to kiss your lips

When they touched again my heart melted in my chest

You kiss me like you mean it

Everything about it feels amazing

And that is what keeps me coming back to you

I’m laying next to you

And you lock your hand into mine

Your arm is around my back

You rub it gently..

I smile at you and you smile back

You make all the pain I feel inside of me disappear

I am alive and its an amazing feeling

The way we talk about life and what we want in it

It feels like all of our dreams are believable

I picture me and you in the future

And all I see is us happy

There is no struggles or troubles

But I know deep down there will be

The happiness we share

Is what feels amazing

You walk me to your door

And you grab my hand

You kiss and hug me

I get into my car and drive away

This sharp pain in my heart occurs

Because I hate to leave you

I don’t know the next time I will get to see you

And it hurts me

But when I get home safely

I crawl into my bed

Staring up at the ceiling

And I still feel amazing

Because I still have you in my life… <3

Reviews

[lauren emily]

This is wonderful! It expresses a lot of the feelings of love(does that make sense? Am I the only one who thinks love has different feelings of it's own? Or am I just confusing everyone by trying to tell them about this. lol)
Great poem, keep up the good work!
~Lauren

[Gravedigger]

Quite touching. I hope that this is the way your world stays...

[thibodeaux]

iam happy its turning out differently this time!!!! see i told you all he needed to do was wake up one day and realize he could lose you!!!!

[Orlando Murcia]

Beautiful absolutley beautiful!
Great job love

Orlando