Tree

I am the other tree.....

Tree

Looking up at a huge green tree

Wishing I could be

The wind blows the leaves

Into the infinite sky

Leaving me thinking of life

When all I want is to fly

Praying all the pain dies

While another tree is on the side

Wanting to see the light

Thinking it will get cut down

Because it has no more fight..

Reviews

[C.J.]

wow i see a grand oak tree next to a pine tree for some reason its very very nice and gets the piont across very well.

[Larissa G.]

As much as I love the idea, I feel like it's too simple and blunt.
I think you know how I feel about expanding your ideas and bringing a spark of creativity to them. ;)
So I won't type the same advice repeatedly.
Just wanted to say I did love the idea and thought it could be expanded.

[Gravedigger]

Trees are very peacefull, and many times they are saved because they are so beautiful or they add a nice touch to the landscaping, but nobody thinks about how the tree feels. Maybe plants feel, maybe they don't but its still good to think that way. Keep on going

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Very nice, a truly heartfelt piece. Great job!