Only You

Only You

I'm trying so hard to run from my past..

Fighting all the hurt that has been thrown at me.. Is...A battle..

You keep me strong

You understand what I have been through

I asked you what you see

Your the only one to answer correctly

You said you see everything under my smile

Others have said they see beauty

Its not about beauty

No one got that but you

Others have said they will never leave me

Its so impossible to believe them

But you have said it

And I believe only you

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

A nice write, it speaks volums of your friendship however it dosen't cover the criteria of what a true friend on the WC is. Thanks for entering my contest.

[C.J.]

nice um this poem is a little harder to get an image in my head but it is still another very well written pice.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

It's a wonderful feeling to have someone to confide in that understands you so completely. Nicely written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

seem you find thew one that understand you , its good Yossi

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

To be seen, with all the heartache in tact, and still truly loved is a testament. Lovely description of such an occurrence. Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing such depth of emotion.
Light,
Siddartha

[Dani California]

It seems like when we fall in love we only see that person. Everyone else sort of fades away into the background, and that one person... gets the most of us, the best of us.

You've displayed that well here. You see only this person, who you are giving your all to. The one you hold close to your heart....in your heart.

Nicely done my friend.. :)