Mistake

Everyone makes mistakes... Please forgive mine....

Mistake

You knew me for a year

We talked about things that were real

You kissed me with passion

Just enough to get me to sleep with you

You didn’t just hurt my heart

You hurt something else…

It wasn’t rape, I wanted it

You knew I wasn’t ready

You saw me freaking out

And you didn’t say a word

You just wanted it from me

When everything was wrong, you kept going

And you weren’t gentle

And your not suppose to cry afterwards

I cried to where I couldn’t breathe….

Wishing I should have said no and pushed you off

I’m the reason you’re alive

Because I won’t let anyone hurt you

Now I have fear stuck inside me

Trying hard to forget

And think of you as a mistake…

Reviews

[unspokenguilt]

wow!
That was really bold...sad but brialliant! good work

[MagicHearted Knight]

It is really amazing stuff. I enjoyed the flow it takes and it brute heart felt honesty is very unique.

[C.J.]

very strongly writen.

[ape domenigoni]

this is very sad but very well written. I think you did a good job on this. :)

[Gravedigger]

Everyone makes mistakes, and there is no such thing as an unforgivable mistake. To err is human...
(rounds of applause as the bystanders clap incessantly..)

[Ammietia]

I think many people go through this, I'm sorry if you had to as well. I hope time really does heal all.

Great short poem.