I�m Tired

A Poem by QuietPoet

It has my life in this poem, with all the emotions and how every inch of me feels...

I’m Tired

When I shower

I feel like all my blood leaks

I’m tired that I sacrifice everything

When I get out of bed

I feel like all my bones break

I’m tired of being broke

When I breathe

My heart skips a beat

I’m tired of the fighting

Finding every reason to be happy

But my world keeps crashing

I’m tired of my life being this way..

© 2008 QuietPoet

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poetforlife

We ALL get tired, honey. My grandma used to say that she was so tired of life getting her down and love breaking her heart and hardship wearing on her mind but she was gonna "keep on keepin' on", It's a good Southern sayin' :) She was one of the strongest women I've ever met who met tragedy after tragedy in her life but she kept her faith and she kept her strength somehow. Whenever I get down, I think of her and all that she went through and how ashamed I would be to give up because if she could make it through all of those things that life threw at her, so could I. I still live by that today. You will get through. THings will get better. Life will not always be so hard.

Posted 17 Years Ago

C.J.	wow this poem was very well thout out i feel like my blood leacks is so vivid that i cant say anything but wow good job. Posted 17 Years Ago wow this poem was very well thout out i feel like my blood leacks is so vivid that i cant say anything but wow good job. Rating /100

Gravedigger

If this is indeed your life, I hope it will not always be this way. You painted a vivid picture in my mind that made me weep and want to reach out to you. I can't find any other words.....

I applaude your magnificent work.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on September 12, 2008

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QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV

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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..