Fix Me

Fix Me

Put me on the surgery bed

Rip my heart out

And fix me..

Take all the tools

Attach piece by piece

And fix me..

Then rip out my brain

Make me forget the damage

And fix me..

Finally take every piece of me

Allow me to be stronger

And fix me…

Reviews

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I agree with the other reviews. Very strong indeed, expressive of your true emotions. "And fix me" wish it was that easy.

[poetforlife]

Unfortunately, sweetheart, no one can "fix" is but ourselves. You are stronger than you think. I can see you strength of character and I know that you will find your way. You, like I, cry out in your poems for some kind of answers. The answer, angel girl, lies within you. Be strong and don't let life defeat you. You are better than than. I wish peace for you, sweet girl.

[C.J.]

owwwww! this poem came out strong and the lines
And fix me.. and
Then rip out my brain
piant a very grusome picture in my mind good job.