Your Coming Home?

I need my best friend here.

Your Coming Home?

My best friend told me

That he is putting in his 2 weeks

At his job in New Mexico

And might be coming back home..

Don’t mess with my heart

Don’t say things you don’t mean

Saying that made me so happy

But I don’t know if your coming home

If you were here, things would be better

I would have someone to run to

I have no one here that is true

And with everything that has happened

You can take all that pain away

Just by a simple hug and I love ya..

And with my boyfriend not being here everyday

You would be the next best thing..

When you left I had no one

No one that cares for me

And that’s why I left all my friends here

I can’t trust them with anything

Like I can with you

And when you’re here

We can make plans to live together

So please tell me your coming home

I need you here so much

Your part of my family

And my heart cries out for you

You’re my best friend

And I miss you

Come home.

Reviews

[unspokenguilt]

Nicely done but remember there's always someone who cares whether you know it or not or wheter you let them or not.

That being said...Great piece!

and much love to you and yours
-Elyssa-

[Laura E. Aranda]

Thanks for asking me to read and review this piece....the magic of a human bond is almost unbelievable!

Quickly, I found this:
your should be you're
you are