If You Asked Me..

If You Asked Me..
If you asked me what I want
I couldn’t tell you..
If you asked me what I need
I couldn’t say..
If you asked me why I never know
I don’t have a clue..
If you asked me why I put people before myself
I don’t have a reason..
If you asked me why I hurt
I couldn't be honest..
If you asked me why I love you
I couldn’t give just one cause..
If you asked me this to my face
I couldn’t give you a straight answer..

Reviews

[Matthew V. H.]

this was good. I am glad i could finally get around to it.
Itf I asked you, this could mean so much. We could be asking you, but at the same time you could be asking us with out asking. if that makes sense.

This is a poem everyone should read and think on. The questions are plain, but it is the answers that are the hardest to find.

cole-

[M. Amphet Salt]

I like this poem. It focuses on one emotion, insecurity and stays with it all the way through. It also has this child-like clueless innocense about it that will give you a good target audience with teenage girls and guys. Good Write. Thanks for sharing.

[Jon Cooper]

I like this.

My favorite part is:
"If you asked me what I want
I couldn't tell you..
If you asked me what I need
I couldn't say.."

I know the feeling well, and I go through that in my head ALL the time.

Very nice.

[Tai-San]

I love this. Kylie, you are such a great writer. You have wonderful talent.

I know you'll go far!

[Dimples87]

This one said so much in so little words. Loved it - a masterpiece. It's wonderful! I feel the exact same way in my own personal life. Keep writing.

[unspokenguilt]

I could ask you a hundred of things, but in the end it's up to you on whether or not to answer them.

Nice Write!
:) elyssa