Just Too Real

I wish I had control at what I feel...

 

Just Too Real
I always just stare at myself
Thinking I’m not beautiful
How can anyone think so?
Tears always run down my face
With my black mascara smeared
What’s so pretty about that?
I see right through my heart..
And I can’t ever see who I am..
Why am I so lost all the time?
All I feel is alone..
Just grab my hands
And hold me until I let it all out..
Until I realize why I’m here..
I hurt so much..
Due to my haunting past..
Its so hard to let go
When its just too real..
 

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

You have a talent to this. I would so give you a hug right now. I love the poem.

[Dimples87]

"I see right through my heart..
And I can’t ever see who I am..
Why am I so lost all the time?
All I feel is alone.."

Wow, you really brought us in to where you are and what it feels like. What you can't handle. Remember, if you ever want to talk, I'll be here or around.

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
This was a good piece for certain ...

"Just grab my hands
And hold me until I let it all out..
Until I realize why I'm here..
I hurt so much.."

Just Beautiful !!!
That's what a TRUE friend should be able to do ...
To hold you tight while you let it all out :D

Really Wonderful Indeed !!!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Sharing your pain will help you see who you are. You love real hard and expect it back. That is okay if you cry love is a powerful emotions and because you put it in your poetry that is why the poems you write are so powerful.

I see right through my heart..
And I can't ever see who I am..
Very powerful lines. This defined your poem! Another great write.

[M. Amphet Salt]

The pain of life is too real. I like how you express yourself in your poetry, finding a release from the pain in you life. You have good imagery here. However the line, "it's hard to let go" at the end I do not feel should be there because the reader can already see how the speaker is suffering.

[sheerpoetry]

beautifully human

[.]

I really really liked this poem.

It spoke to me... it really did.

=]

x

[~Mary Ann~]

Alot of people wish they can control what they feel. The heart always doubts and is hardest on oneself. Trust me I have been there. It does not help to have lived through a past that is always present in the back of your mind. But there are times when one needs to put the past in the past. We have learned lessons from it and it is time to live for the present and plan for the future.... What I say isn't easy to do. I struggle with it every day... but if you truly look, the past doesn't define you.. you decide the person that defines you... and as far as I know, you have a wonderful heart and a lovely spirit... :)

Keep fighting... you deserve happiness and love... and guess what? I am betting there is someone who believes you are beautiful.. you just need to believe it too :)

Hugs... Beautiful writing my friend. Honest ink!

[just is]

I know how you feel on this one, i have felt this way a million times. Somtimes I tell myself to snap out of it and wake up. If someone don't like me the way I am let them go. It's our heart that matters. If we are beautiful there that is all that matters.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Feelings can't be controlled and if you try to contain them they become a ticking tie bomb that can hurt you and innocent loved ones down the line.. I know how you feel on this and great to see you express it with words, the heathy way to do it.