Hiding In My Soul

Everyone has secrets. But I'm not totally sure if its a secret, just thinking of what I want is all.

Hiding In My Soul

I hold a secret inside me
Where no one can get to
Because I don’t know how
They would react to what I feel..
Or what they would feel for that matter
Right now in my life
I’m stuck in this hurricane
Where it takes my breath
Knocks me from my feet
And I begin to sink..
My heart will only fall
Deeper into my grave
If I don’t take my life
In my hands and set it free
In the next few years
I really need to figure out
What I truly want
Before I leak out
This secret I hold
Out to all of you..
But for now it will
Stay buried in my soul..
 

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

I really felt the pulse of this piece. Every line makes you want to pause and soak it all in. I am trying to catch up on all my read request and you QP keep dazzling me with your words.

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

This was just awesome! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece of work!

[Phantom Heart]

Wow! simply amazing... Wow! I LOVE this poem it is absolutely fantastic! It hits very close to home, and I can't think of anybody else who could have done a better job expressing this idea of secrets. did I say I love this poem yet? Because this is a super poem! Very well done.

[just is]

Such a plea and longing in this.
I can feel this.

[17thWhitePrince]

Ahhh That's Cool =D
Nice flow ...
Good Poem
I liked it =)
Well done =D