I See, I feel.. I care

This is about drug addicts/suicidal people that I have become in contact with. Its all different people. They have touched me more than anyone will ever know..

 

I See, I feel.. I care
Chills ran down my entire body
When I saw her neck cut
Its like she tried to slit her throat..
Such a sweet little lady too

 

He came and asked if he could
Have a apron that we wear
He had this look in his eye
And I knew what he wanted to do with it..

 

I walked by him and he was in a chair
A doctor and nurse where near him
He was having a seizure
I walk into the hallway to breath..

 

Her eyes were beating red
As like she has been high her whole life
And doesn’t know why she’s here
But the nicest lady you’ll ever meet..

 

She walks as slow as a turtle
I greet her every single day
And all she does is drool
She can barely talk..

 

He’s always commenting on my smile
The happiest guy there is
And the sweetest
But labeled as a physco..

 

I saw her talking on the phone
She said something happened to her dog
Her eyes leaked tears
And said “I don’t know why I’m here”..

 

They all hurt,
So much sadness,
Just wanting to get better,
So lost and misplaced..

 

Missing their families,
Dying to live different,
Wanting to be free,
To run clean..

 

All they want is one soul
To take notice of their problems
Someone to need them
Wanting someone to see..

 

I’m that soul for you,
I get this urge to just ask why
But I hold back because its not my place
Just know I do care about what happened..

Reviews

[Bud]

These things happen with people so that others may see that no matter how bad it gets in our lives, it can always be worse. The thought alone is not enough to understand. It takes the imagery to really make the point settle in our minds eye. Only those who experience can TRULY understand. You have been blessed with the opportunity to see first hand. This is a very moving piece. It really hits home for me. Thank you for sharing.

[deeps]

Yes! Things happen to people for reasons who knows why.
You have expressed these feelings well.
I won't say what I have tried and not tried.
But I must say I can relate to this write.
This really hits home for me.
Thank you for sending me this write.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This was very powerful and strong.
I'm really glad that you wrote something on a crucial subject like this.
Everyone should read this, it is very thoughtful!

[Sean M. Addams]

a very sad emotional write.... good detail and flow in this one.... nice job on this .. another impressive piece you have here...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You don't need to know someone personally to care bout them... a really wonderful piece full of humanity.

[A]

How sad. Well it's could that those people have you there to talk to. I can't help but to feel bad for those people. I hope everything gets better in their life. Great poem! It was so emotional and it made it that much better! :)