Wanting You

Wanting You
Sometimes I’m standing there
And I get this feeling where
I want to drop everything
And run to you

 

I think about your arms
And how much I want to be in them
I know you would hold me
Until the end of time

 

I want your lips to touch mine
To have you lay on top of me
Make me feel so small
And cuddle till morning

 

There’s not another person
Where I’m so open to
Your not like the rest
You show me you care

 

You don’t play the games
Nothing is hidden
Its all out in the open
You tell me what you want

 

When you say you want the same as I
It lifts my heart up to the clouds
But it falls when it knows
That your so far away

 

But knowing all of that
We still allow it to happen
The feelings are just too strong
And I like how we are
 

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Romantic writing definitely treats you well. You speak of desire, but in a muted way, a tender way. It brings to mind my own lover and the connection we share ourselves. This was excellently done.

[THE LOST ROSE]

This is vintage QP, very raw with honest emotions but with that special touch that makes a reader think about your poetry long after the review is written. I think I am ready for a top-10 list of my favorite poems by you. Thanks for creating and sharing such wonderful and powerful lines like;

I want your lips to touch mine
To have you lay on top of me
Make me feel so small
And cuddle till morning

These are the moments that you captured that sends the reader back to that time in their life or a desire to have that moment. Wonderful wonderful write!

[Bud]

Wow, Kylie! Such an honest, and raw emotional piece! It's a Wonderful testament of how you feel for that lucky one. How you long to be with him, and even knowing that you are far apart, you are still optimistic about the relationship. Outstanding!

[barricade]

This is beautiful...so innocent and pure...feelings expressed wonderfully :-)
great work. Keep it up.

Barricade...

[deeps]

This is very heartfelt and full of emotion
very well expressed.

[Dillon Cotter]

really good, you can really catch your feeling and desire for him and his heart here. nice.

-Will

[lorynrrr]

wow your good keep it up i really like it